this is weak ..........get rid off the outer glow and strokes
1 the render is cut bad
2 typo is bad should use the most 4 different fonts i think u chose the wrong one imo
3 the design looks out dated ...cause if u plannin on makin money or gettin better u might wanna look at what other ppl are doin like look on the slide show on this site http://jahkno.com/ party ads there sum nice ones there where u can see how a decent flyer shud be layed out a bit a inspiration cause right now dat aint sayin didly squat....